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Sunday, June 26, 2016

Followed by Frost by Charlie N. Holmberg

Seventeen-year old Smitha is a giant pain: conceited, self-centered – a jerk.  As I began reading Followed by Frost, it occurred to me that if she didn’t change – and soon – I wasn’t going to be able to continue reading the story.  Smitha is definitely not the kind of heroine that interests me.  But having read and really enjoyed The Paper Magician trilogy, also by Charlie Holmberg, I trusted the author to fix things up.

Happily, unlike Smitha’s parents and sister and long-suffering friends and neighbors, her father’s employee, Morden, shows up to set things straight.  Morden fancies he’s in love with Smitha.  Clearly he doesn’t know her very well and appears to be making judgments based more on her good looks than her captivating personality.  Smitha, being true to herself, thinks he isn’t good enough for her and when he asks her to meet him one evening, she says yes and then blows him off entirely.  Uh oh.

Morden is not exactly what he appears to be.  He is not the humble, lovesick worker but rather, a wizard in disguise.  Smitha needs to be taught a lesson, he decides, and he’s just the one to teach it.  Morden turns Smitha into a sort of ice princess – and not in the beautiful but chilly Elsa from Frozen kind of way.

Smitha loses her good looks and her friends and family.  Her presence causes a constant snowstorm that dooms any community in which she lives, even killing off some of the locals.  Soon no one wants her around and she gets booted out, taking to the road for three long years of lonely wandering.

It’s not all lonely times, however, for while Smitha wanders along suffering all the pain and inconvenience of being a human freezer, she encounters Sadriel, a charming and handsome gentleman who just happens to be Death.  He doesn’t want Smitha’s soul, but rather, her “companionship” – or something like that.  Time and again, he asks Smitha to join him in a manner in which she would be neither alive nor dead.

Smitha’s not really into the whole romancing with Death kind of thing, so she resists (mostly) and, little by little, she transforms from self-centered jerk to someone thoughtful, kind, and selfless.  The transformation begins just in time for her to come to the aid of a young prince, Imad, who asks her to come to his drought stricken homeland and bring snow.  The new and improved Smitha agrees and soon takes up residence in the town under the watchful and particularly attentive gaze of Lo, the very handsome and somewhat silent captain of the guard.

I’ll just leave it there.

Followed by Frost is an excellent, old-fashioned fairy tale that is a satisfying story from beginning to end.

LAME FACTOR: 0 OF 5 (Smitha’s annoying tendencies straightened out before I could get aggravated enough to stop reading)

YOUR PARENTS WILL FREAK FACTOR:  Not unless they’re really weird


BRAIN POWER:  The story is very well-written but within the abilities of an average reader.